Can you please take a minute to rate my short SAT essay from a scale of 1-6?

Is this a joke? You can not seriously be thinking about submitting this for a SAT. What type of school are you aiming for here? A community college or an online program? Seriously, go back, and work the flow. It is too choppy. There also are several grammar and punch. errors. The depth is shallow. You need to go deeper. So that you can handle college. This essay appears to have been slopped together by a freshman or maybe sophmore.